Written by: Roy
Translated by: Jigglypuff
PDF: By USI
ePub: By eCookie
Below are the changes USI made for the PDF vol 1:
- Corrected grammar and added punctuation where needed.
- Shale was named Shell in later chapters, changed name to Shale in all chapters (sounds better to me).
- Updated Aro-ne to Araune (it was changed in v2 but not updated in v1).
- Mizelia was called Mizeria in v1, changed it to Mizelia as it sounds better for a girl.
- Added Glossary based on info found in vol 1-3. (figuring out which god was which was a bit of a challenge.)
- Renamed chapters.
- added –de gozaru at the end of Asagi’s sentences in chapter 16.
- added Raypin’s -de aru to the ending of his sentences where appropriate (he appeared in prior chapters, but you didn’t add -de aru until later.)
Below are the changes USI made for the PDF vol 2:
- Fixed the grammar and punctuation where needed.
- Changed Shell to Shale to be consistent with v1.
- Updated and expanded Glossary with new info in v2 and descriptions of Jamil family from the raws.
- Changed the comma to a dash in front of ‘de aru’ and ‘de gozaru’ to keep consistent with v1. (ex. hello, de aru –> hello –de aru)
- Changed the ‘character speaking’ ending from ‘- Shale’ to ‘[Shale]’ to be consistent with the majority of v2 and all of v3.
- Changed Lenny –> Reni in sections where it had not been changed yet (beginning in ch.6)
- Changed Karma –> Carm in places that hadn’t been changed yet (beginning in chapter 11)
PDF (Edited by and PDF created by: Usi)
EPUB (Edited by and EPUB created by: eCookie)